the changes brought about by suffering/part 2

the changes brought about by suffering/part 2

first part 1 again for reference then part 2
fiction
edward w pritchard


The changes brought about by suffering

what they are know not I.

But real,

loneliness, failure,

ambition fizzled,

harmony lost,
solitary existence.

Emergence on a dark night of rain drenched wretchedness,

flux flashes, red dawn dripping fatuity.
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part 2

the changes brought about by suffering/part 2

Mr. P, Fydor Doestoevsky here.

I, Fydor am not offended by your poem. It is not just a cover of the themes from my book "The Brothers Karamazov". First of all I know for a fact you did not finish my book.

Secondly, I am pleased with your progress. Redemption through suffering. It happens slowly, gradually over time.

Now, to be serious; what is redemption? Search far, search inside yourself. Questions not answers matter.

I like your mind body connection stuff. Watch the Gambling though; its just sublimation of other urges. By all means have a glass of wine with diner. Just don't think too much. Why not go to the folies bergere instead of just writing about it. It is all quite natural.

Other advice. Write for money, its getting late.
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