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Thursday, April 8, 2010

The Strange Case of Doctor Melvin-part 2

The Strange Case of Doctor Melvin-part 2

fiction
edward w pritchard

see part 1 The Strange Case of Doctor Melvin
see The computer who went to junior high parts 1-6
see-Beverly The Hippies Devolve
see-commentary on the Kent State Shoots 1970
see Statistical Prediction of the Future by Artificial Intelligence

The Strange Case of Doctor Melvin-part 2

by-me

copyright 2010

Setting A major University actually Kent State School of Business-Year is 2018

Gabby's Office is dream like. It houses a large masculine super Computer trying to evolve into being human by developing sensibilities and emotions. Occasionally she rides an exercise bike stage left. The trading room is bowl like and is visible just off stage. Upstage on wall is a picture of a beautiful Ivy League type girl a former lover of Gabby who she has walked out on twice. Hank's bar is a three story building with a bar on second floor up a flight of steps and the third floor is a hippy style pad where people mysteriously crash when sleepy or needing to have significant dreams.

Cast
Gabby-now 38,troubled but brilliant,gay,ultra successful,un-corporate,a beat or goth
Melvin-Gabby's 18 year old assistant, typical young man from Midwest-brilliant in science and math, lacking in experience and humanities, falls in love, typical love triangle develops, twist is jealous original love is a super computer[female]
Craybo- Gabby co-programmed this super computer, he is male, see other stories above for him, went to junior high to develop human emotions- he is famous world wide, "Father" of Milly
Milly-Craybo's offspring, super computer- female- can be either Medea type or Electra depending on story sponsor's choice and preferences of plot device
Kasie-typical blond large chested blue eyed beauty, Milly hates her initially,, depending on plot preferred she is either Medea or Electra by end of story

Time Feb 5, 2018-five months have passed since Melvin became Gabby's assistant and we are in the middle of the second Semester of Melvin's freshman year at Kent State. Time moves in all directions delusionally in this author's stories.

Act 1
Hanks Bar-Milly [ an expensive lap-top - who is the mobile locomotion of it's super computer self back at KSU] and Kasie are having lunch. Several burn-outs from the 60's are slumped over bar. Burn-outs see nothing usual for the beautiful student to be talking to a lap top computer via voice and vice versa

Kasie
When I met Melvin I couldn't keep my eyes or hands off him.

Milly
I was stuck on his intellect

Both Kasie and Milly simultaneously
What are we going to do with Dr. Melvin?
they laugh sardonically

End part 2

Note to author
persist persist persist

agent
we need to clean this up-rather vague I am afraid

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