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Monday, November 11, 2013

waking at 3AM to write something

waking at 3AM to write something

fiction
edward w Pritchard

toiling alone for the god's glory: another metaphor, why we write



Toiling alone for God's glory a lone native American Indian worked in front of the ancient vacant cliff dwelling piecing together rocks to form symbols known only to the tribe that he was now the last living member of. The work was hard and very hot and since there was no water he often drank the bitter juice of the dessert cactus to maintain his strength. He needed his strength because the task at hand was monumental and he wanted to finish the project and his message to God before he collapsed from exhaustion at his toil.

Spanish conquistadors came on the old withered man and were set to kill him when they found he had no gold or accumulated wealth. It happened by chance that one of the Spanish soldiers was in addition to be an adventurer and searcher of fortune; also had been a man of God in his youth. That soldier stopped his fellow conquistadors from killing the toiling Indian, who the soldier saw was a self appointed holy man working alone for God's glory.

Although they couldn't read the symbols of the tribe, for a few days before they left in the search for gold and wealth, the members of the small Spanish party helped the old Indian finish his secret message to God. When the project was finished the Conquistadors held a small funeral ceremony for the old Indian who died as soon as his labors in competing the message was finished.

Later when the Spanish party returned to Spain, the soldier who had intervened to save the Indian was curious to what the message the old Indian had said and sometimes the conquistador speculated in his old age on what would be so important to say that the tired Indian back near the cliff dwellings would toil and sweat alone in a race to finish the message before his death. What was his secret message to God?

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